Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter
and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is the full stops and capital letters.

I need to improve on spelling and adjectives.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

Wow! I’ve never seen this place before. The zebra is  walking as slow as an ant. The lion is sunbathing on the roof. The bird is brightly coloured. The giraffe was driving. The meerkats are standing up. The bear is sitting in the van.