We are learning how to write to describe things well. The teachers gave us a picture of an old man and asked us to write to tell us what he looks like. They hoped we would use lots of adjectives, adverbs, nouns about parts of his face and maybe some similes or metaphors. Here is my work.
He looks like santa. He has hairy, big eyebrows, blueeyes, baggie eyes, white hairs, white bushy facial
hair, big bold patch. His hairs are falling out. He looks scary on one side and
normal the other side is like dead. He looks like he's been in jail for a couple of times.
He has a big nose with freckles. He looks like he is 89. His beard covers his entire mouth.
