There are heaps of interesting things here in New Zealand. Would you able to descript a bit more of what New Zealand is like? You could talk about our beautiful beaches or fantastic forests or the snow capped mountains? If you use more describing words it helps to paint a picture in someone’s head. For example I could say that New Zealand has lots of beaches. Or I could add more describing words and say, here in New Zealand we are very lucky a very long coastline dotted with golden sandy beaches. I think I would rather read the second sentence not the first one. Would you be able to edit your post to add more information about our great country? If you comment once you have edited your post I can come and have a look and hopefully award you with the full points for this activity :)
I look forward to reading about your description of New Zealand soon!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Joel,
There are heaps of interesting things here in New Zealand. Would you able to descript a bit more of what New Zealand is like? You could talk about our beautiful beaches or fantastic forests or the snow capped mountains? If you use more describing words it helps to paint a picture in someone’s head. For example I could say that New Zealand has lots of beaches. Or I could add more describing words and say, here in New Zealand we are very lucky a very long coastline dotted with golden sandy beaches. I think I would rather read the second sentence not the first one. Would you be able to edit your post to add more information about our great country? If you comment once you have edited your post I can come and have a look and hopefully award you with the full points for this activity :)
I look forward to reading about your description of New Zealand soon!
Blog ya later,
Dani