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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 11 November 2021

Crashing plane

Plane Crash - Here is a story I wrote in response to a picture.

One long day this little boy called Jimmy who had super powers was walking along the path way when he saw lightning strike at the plane. He started to run. The plane was engulfed in flames.  He lifted the plane but the plane was too heavy. The plane smashed him to the ground. All the people in the plane survived. It was a good day for everyone except for the little squished boy. The boy died and they had a funeral.


Gorilla snapshot

 The gorilla is a big fat verson of king kong and hes sleeping on a farm in sydney the man is a super good zoo person the man is trying to get the gorilla in to the zoo and the dog is following him the gorilla is happy and hungry so he is starting to get angry 


gorrila

Friday, 22 October 2021

play make create

 This week for play make create we read a book about peace.  I did what makes me calm.


Friday, 1 October 2021

cross contrey

 thanks to covid we could only ohaeawai kids in our cross contrey this year I came 2nd in my year groop



clocks

 We followed a procedure to make a 3D clock we used it to show time first i will show you 9:00 then 11:55



   



Friday, 17 September 2021

poem

 we have been lerning how to write diffront styles of poertyhere is mi black out


Wednesday, 30 June 2021

Mrs C

Mrs C our lovely librarian is retiring. here is my goodbye letter.

Wednesday, 23 June 2021

personification

 We have been learning about
personification. Here is mine about stars.


Thursday, 10 June 2021

Autumn Leaves

We were learning about autumn leaves. I chose to write a diamante poem using the correct language features about autumn leafs. Here is mine



Friday, 21 May 2021

my holladay

 I went on holladay when the other class went to progect island song on a boat you can read about my holladay right here


Wednesday, 19 May 2021

I diden't poem

Last week we did a poem about what we didn't do in the holidays to show everyone how boring it is to read the same starter of a sentence.  Here is mine.

 




 

Wednesday, 24 March 2021

Old man describing

We are learning how to write to describe things well. The teachers gave us a picture of an old man and asked us to write to tell us what he looks like. They hoped we would use lots of adjectives, adverbs, nouns about parts of his face and maybe some similes or metaphors. Here is my work.



He looks like santa. He has  hairy, big eyebrows, blueeyes, baggie eyes, white hairs, white bushy facial

 hair, big bold patch. His hairs are falling out. He looks scary on one side and

normal the other side is like dead. He looks like he's been in jail for a couple of times.

He has a big nose with freckles. He looks like he is 89. His beard covers his entire  mouth.

Friday, 19 March 2021

Te Rehutai


This week we were excited to be learning a bit about The Rehutai, the Team New Zealand AC 75 that has been sailing in the Waitemata Harbour.  Here is my information.





Tuesday, 9 March 2021

couplet poem

 We have used opposite adjectives to write a couplet poem here is my poem can you find my opposite  adjectives.




Tuesday, 23 June 2020

The Peco Incident Animation.

In term one we red a book called the PECO  incident. we made a animation about  and it is about these two kids and the mum and dad + these two hippies.  they are travelling  and there is a bird flu and it is killing heaps of birds.  it and here it is

Wednesday, 17 June 2020

Rocket Work

I was waiting nervously for the rocket to arrive. 20 minutes later the steps were waiting for me. I put my white suit on and I put my fish bowl helmet on so I don't suffocate up high by the moon.  Finally I stepped on the step and walked to my seat and sat down and I controlled the rocket and I pressed the start button - starting in 321 blast off!! We shot up in the air. The other people there were waiting outside cheering, hopefully I would make it to Jupiter but I still had 2 days and 9 hours to go.  2 days and 9 hours later I landed on Jupiter.The doors opened for me and I was on the last step and then I was on Jupiter. I fell downa really big hole and   saw  this really big green group of little aliens. I stole a little UFO so I could get out of the big hole. Finally I got out of the hole because that hole was too small for the UFO  and then I got in the rocket went back down to earth. I live.

Friday, 13 September 2019

science fair

Yesterday we had our school science fair. My investigation was about volcanoes

Friday, 24 May 2019

space

this week we have been witing here is a pese of my witing

Monday, 18 March 2019

Colour poem

We wrote poems about our house colour. I am in red house.

Friday, 15 March 2019

environmental writing

We sketched our bean plants that we grew in class. We then wrote words around the outside to describe the bean plant. We had to use these words to write a piece of descriptive writing. We then cut out our picture and glued it on to your writing. Here is my writing.